Correcting Vague Language

Vague language is language that talks about something without directly saying what it is.

Avoid vague language in your essays whenever possible, since it makes your ideas more difficult to follow. The following are examples of vague words or expressions, along with more specific ones:

vague

This poem gives me a certain feeling.

specific

This poem gives me a happy feeling.

vague

A particular experience taught me the value of physical health.

specific

My years traveling with the circus taught me the value of physical health.

vague

This paper will explain my beliefs about animal testing.

specific

This paper will explain my opposition to animal testing.

vague

The author's view of taxes can be seen in Chapter Three.

specific

The author's favorable view of taxes can be seen in Chapter Three.